Ice Pick...

13-16 huh ::ha-doo-kin:: i-assault-with a fire-ball-hit you wack bitch
Vonne now just sit back and continue to admire-raw-shyt you cant spit
no..could of been better
like elves i "(w)rap-with-skill-and-accuracy" while you sit in your crib So?
i'll bring u "down to earth" like atmospheric-gravity busting you with real lines Ho
played, dont like it
rate me just a 7 or an 8.. i wont be upset cuz i'm still "above U" on-the-keyboard
i'm not a fuckin horse so why are u "jockin-me-for?" you fuckin R V whore
i'll leave u roped-in-knots then pull ur "ears" like shoe-laces ,you dont eat emcee's Yvonne stop lying
You switched ya name so much like saimese twins ur known for havin two-faces and look at ya record you should start trying
the "above u" line was ok and the last line was ok as well

.................................................. .

Yvonne...

IP:



Now I don’t wanna fuck ur brain up so ima use a simple lang*
Its crazy how u wash out 58 stains..ur mouth has gatta be big bang
had the idea...
You zombie walking in d rap game,b4 u know it u soon get a ball on ya face**
The only place u rap is in my ass..cos on herre oldies aint got no more space***
dont like it
This dude thinks he got eyes to see muh fuckers on the RapVerse site
When its his skull we see..cos he been sucked dry outta too much B-bite****
ok...i guess
Ur punches will never burn a livin flesh..they just ICED b4 u thro ‘em in ya spit
So,im astonished how u PICK me thinking 2 rip,when I just knocked u out like in ya sig
ok....sig punches are weak though


Yvonne wins this battle for a better overall verse
i felt that she/he has a few more on track less played
harder hitting punches then pick did, try to get rid of explaining your verses to people, dont explain why you threw
a punch or a personal and pick try not to use so mane brackets or quotes kind of makes the reader not interested
in readin your verse much.

V/ Yvonne

__________________