The Original Half Ass King
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Voted For: Premanition
well, first off i'd like to say, Prem...why you battlin herbs like GZ, haha, jk...I merked him before to, but ima be honest, GZ, you have really elevated since I battled you, keep it up son, I been definatly seein some improvment big time.
Opener - Prem, GZ's was very weak (no real punch)
Closer - GZ, both were kinda weak, but I was really feelin Prems
Punches - Prem, def hit harder than GZ
Personals - Prem, had 2 good ones, GZ didnt use any
Structure - GZ, Prems lines were kinda long which threw off ya flow
Vocab - Prem, althought GZ has been elevating a lot in this area, Prems was just more tech and consistant
metas - Neither had anything great
multies - Prem used quite a few, GZ tried but they were kinda weak attempts
As you can see above^^^ Prem took this one. He had a great opener, both hard punches/personals, Vocab was tech and consistant, and he had lots of multies which added to the his overall performance. GZ, like I said you have been elevating a lot dawg, keep it up. In this battle, you had a good closer, your structure/flow was on, and some of your punches were not too bad, just Prems were harder. Next time try using a better vocab, think of more whitty/creative punches, multies, and use more rhymes that are actually about the person your battling (personals)...Props to both, Prem did a wikked job and GZ is comming along great, payce....
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