Voted For: lyric

Emcee:AutoMATIK

Verse:
I was declined from IJL … Now Ya crew hopeless
My Spits sick to leave ya shit wet like pump action on super soakers
Now who hard as this ? Yo whole squad is bitch
When im threw, ya crew gonna have to view u threw a glass like aquatic fish
Heres a tip kid … battling me in a key, is the worst way to lose
Face it … you and ya niggas play sick like me on the first day of school
Im punkin this dude wit verbs that’ll leave his stomach in two
You stuck-and-its-true you know imma win. So theres nuttin to lose
You trying to live? How When I eat Punches and until my flow Inflict Hi’
Gunna Have u Grabbin Ya Throat And Gasping For Breath' Like Pneumonia Symptoms

Comments:um...nothin much to say but elevate and hit harder wit ya punches...aiight metas but not really all that ya know..

Marks:
Wordplay - 4/10
Metas - 5/10
Vocabulary - 6/10
Structure - 5/10
Punches - 6/10
Opener - 5/10
Closer – 6/10
Personals – 4/10
Enjoyment – 3/10
Creativity - 4/10
Overall - 48/100
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Emcee:lyric

Verse:
Your shits all played and old school, It's sad this loser stuck wit this fate
Cause sending yourself valentines, is the last time you had an up-date
You payed your ghostwriter too much, now you in debt but fuck it
How you gonna throw a verse at me, when you can't even budget
Comin at me on AIM, desperately begging me to get in my crew
When-you-write-like "this and" still say that your "not-a-newb"
^Who writes like that anymore, dawg quit using worthless rhymes
Faggot jacked off on a newspaper, just to get with the Times
Jus a fuckin bitch, you aint improving, whackness hasn't passed
Cause this dumbass hit the learning curve, and his computer crashed

Comments:well i can safely say that you came harder wit metas and punches...thats what winz the game...

Marks:
Wordplay - 5/10
Metas - 7/10
Vocabulary - 6/10
Structure - 7/10
Punches - 6/10
Opener - 6/10
Closer – 6/10
Personals – 7/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 6/10
Overall - 62/100
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