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Old 10-05-04, 02:32 PM   #22
JackOfAllTradez
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Voted For: $ik Wit It™

wow first off hott battle and its obvious that you both are at eachothers throats so ill start my vote...

Emcee:Emcee lol

Verse:
We Can Play Simon Says and We Can Call This Oppisite Day …
U Can Command A Win, But $ik Will Just Take It Away…
Easily Knock-Aside-Ya-Punchez, like puttin' Doorz Nex-Ta-Fists…
Like Dehydrated-Midgit-Bungeez, ya Fall-Too-Short for Top-Spitz…
Fuckin' Shake-Ya-Cranium! Like Brainz-Placed-In-Blenderz…
Ya Sequeled-Health-Moviez! Don't Come-Complete in Sickest-Enderz…
This kid a Hero? Shit he aint Fly and he even has a Torn Cape…
And I hit punches in his Face like Graphical Porn Tapes…
Might As Well Call Me Lil Flip, The Way I'm Revising Ya Verse …
This Game's Over, I Can See Them Now, Already Carrying In Ya Hearse…

Commentsk hott shit...straight outta ya ass...lol i have nothin else to comment on...

Marks:
Wordplay - 7/10
Metas - 8/10
Vocabulary - 7/10
Structure - 8/10
Punches - 8/10
Opener - 6/10
Closer – 7/10
Personals – 6/10
Enjoyment – 7/10
Creativity - 6/10
Overall - 67/100
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Emcee:ella

Verse:
Ok umm...

calls me out, n unlike half this site i dont make an eternal excuse.
i had no idea you cats were still around, after the open mic by verbal abuse.
im ferdal with truth, and deadly as im servin him fonts.
and all Ai said was:

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phantom
something that wack, doesnt even deserve a response.


i better go back and retake social studies as this months elective.
cause i was unaware that ppl who duck so often, can be so much respected.
fuck effective, all together you need to quit spits.
hows this bitch avoiding to slit wrists when hes just a check on a hit list.
your only dope with a bong, and its too late to forfit this.
ellas missed it, cause im still wondering what it is that your sick with?[/FONT]

Comments:man..you really took it to the guy.....nice personals...luved the open mike part and the quote by phantom...i just liked emcees more...no hate

Marks:
Wordplay - 6/10
Metas - 7/10
Vocabulary - 5/10
Structure - 5/10
Punches - 5/10
Opener - 8/10
Closer – 7/10
Personals – 9/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 7/10
Overall - 63/100
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