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Old 10-05-04, 02:46 PM   #11
Magic5
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Voted For: Still_Remain

Still_Remain
structure is good.. flow is on target.. good, funny way to come about goin at the topic.. very interesting.. the topic didnt allow for much imagery, so whatever.. emotion is decent..

str8_hood
structure is good.. flow falls off a little bit.. u went about the topic in a predictable way.. once again, the topic doesnt allow for much imagery.. hardly any emotion at all..

Overall
both had a good structure.. neither had imagery.. Still_Remain had the better flow, he went about the topic in a more creative way, and he had more emotion.. so basing off of that.. Still_Remain gets my vote..

VOTE - STILL_REMAIN