Get Cooked Hoe
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This was feedback posted for Dopeman
IP:
They say stubbornness seeps only skin deep,
If this were true, why this peep want round 2 with me?
Your bars starve to death with no biting and no feeding,
I cut off his life support, he’s weak when he ain’t been feasting
Cause your rambling antics are anti-fantastic,
Flows dried up in desperate need of chapstic
See Dice be Serta-fied like the mattress,
Alas, you hold no hope to surpass my class,
So if I kick my flow free and I keep it locked off the top,
Howcome I’m white with a mic yet your cheddar-bob and I’m Poppa-Doc?
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U HAD WORDPLAYS AND PUNCHES GOOD SPITTIN QUICK KEY VERSE........PLUS GOOD FLOW AND GOOD STRUTURE KEEP IT UP MAYNE
SHOTTA-
man, ya rhymes are comin up dumber than 'larry'..which proves i'm the man an you the mice..
the first round u beat me an that was luckier than rollin double 6 on the 'DICE'..*1*
ya 'nice' rhymes are gonna be proved to 'finish last'...
ya retard texts wouldnt be 'bright' even if u turned up the screen Contrast!..*2*
better grab ya gas mask cause i'm bout to set a 'gasoline dream' like 'outkast'..
an if the 'vast' majorety should vote for u then its obvious u kiss there ass!..*3*
bitch, this is like a dog track, an ya was lucky once, now u truely are ''trynna gamble''..
this aint no beef, cause i know your addicted to my 'Lines' like naomi campbell
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DATS HOT GOOD PUNCHES NICE FLOW AND GOOD STRUTURE
OVERALL=DOPEMAN CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES AND FLOW I THINK HE GOING TO WIN DIS BATTLE
DIS JUST AN FEEDBACK PEACE
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