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Old 10-05-04, 07:49 PM   #14
Peter Parker
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

lyric: decent verse.............

your downs were obviously your played lines......
it flowed smoothly and was never choppy..........
punches were decent some effective................
originality...some were some weren't.................
overall: 6/10

auto: slightly above average verse

flow got choppy sometimes in my opinion.........
punches were effective and half-decent..........
originality was better...................................
overall: 7/10
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