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Old 10-05-04, 10:43 PM   #8
~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
This was feedback posted for Lil-Youngstah

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^lil' youngstah- 7/11?
Now Befo I "Bust" a Cap by "Clicking-da-Trigga"//
U better think it "Twice" about Yo-life-Nigga...
^ i don't see why you put quotations around what you wrote when there's no word-play or metaphors..

yung soulja-
->You ain't no lyricist you can't spit bitch you swalla =
->Based on yo name you still a "juvenile" you get it from yo mama=
^nice way to end the battle for ya first, good luck with this
but ur opener was the best personal stay up.. get at me,
~Lady Fiya~
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