yo gurl i have to say u have mad potential and keep postin n listen to ppl cus were here to help u out, yea work on ur struc and vocab also maybe some wordplay and i swear i heard that dog line used before buti could be wrong so try not to use similiar lines but any way keep postin gurl, hit my open mic up "cruelty" iite -1-

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