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Old 10-05-04, 11:51 PM   #8
50Cal.
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Voted For: surgical

ok surgical structure is ok a little streched in some places ok flow a good vocab now to where you lacked cain and ablel aint die out cain was cursed to walk the earth forever in the land of cain anyways punches aint hit but were ok disses were weak work on those and you will be much better a 5/10
oreo good structure and flow i like how your madd active and battle alot you will get better nut your punches are weak and disses too plus you need better wordplay your verse lacks because of that and makes you lose a 4/10
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