sum mad imagery here in all the verses. lol ur verse was just too long and difficult to read but u still kept up wit the imagery. yas coulda done wit uppin ya vocab. just one thing tho u only examined the situation in a one dimensional way. i mean i've lived on estates (british equivalent of the projects) all my life wit no money but i've never given in and then gone on to commit crime. i understand why yas might have written bout it but u just gotta fuck all the people not given ya jobs and just keep at it till ya get one. lol i kno thats all a bit long fuckin winded but it was just sumthin i was thinkin when readin this piece. anyway check mine ninja philosophy. aight cuz peace