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Old 10-06-04, 02:18 PM   #10
Lil-Youngstah
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Voted For: mc_funny1

aight this Vote goes mc_funny1
though both versez was a bit off it goes 2 him

he had good structure
came hard, though he got weak on a line or so
though u need help on ya punchlines but it was good
keep doin ya thing mc_funny1

Bad_man
also good structure
though a couple of lines didn't rhyme
punchlinez bit betta
came weak at da end

u need some work on ya lines bad_man
& on punchlines
though both versez was pretty weak
but keep doin ya thing both of ya

no hatin or notin on these vote
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