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Old 10-06-04, 02:45 PM   #12
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Voted For: Omnipotent

weak battle...
Omnipotent...man get rid of the // and the bold and the "lol" after some of your lines..those things scream whack! you hade decent punches tho...lines were a bit stretched...otherwise a nice consistent verse

D-Rex...you came mad weak and played....too many played out gay/sex punchea and wannabe E-thug shit...nothing real hard hitting in your verse man

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