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Old 10-06-04, 02:52 PM   #18
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I just don't give a fuck!
 
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Voted For: caliph

...Spittin out raps soundin like malarky, invisible... gettin stop by my rap dimocracy, hipocracy alls ya spit, when my flows put ya out miraculosly/
Didn't Rhyme^ No Punch. 0/10
...Ya gettin rejected like kids to small for rides, commin up short at designated times, ya raps be like dirty pipes, how ya spittin resinated ryhmes/
Is It Just Me Or Did That Not Make Scense^ 2/10
...Poppin this newbs top like a shampagne cork, bendin and twistin An's more then bikes on torque, / ya never gone all the way, only cummin to a fork/
To the end of the week I live by the beat like you live check to check, and if you no move yo feet then I dont eat so we like neck to neck.
^The Flow Was Off Mad^ Not Reall A Great Punch 3/10

Ya Flow Was Off Structure Was Bad Too......No Punches And Half Didn't Make Scense......

This rookie wanna push me damn he suicidal as fuck
Its over like 4 leaf clovers he survive me its luck
Nice Punch^ I Heard That Before But Still A Good Punch..7/10
One zero on both sides its hopeless for you to keep it the same
If you threw up gasline on a bonfire you still couldnt spit flames
Lmao! Dope Bar. Nice Use Of Metas. 8.5/10
Ya elevations placement underground like dearly departed
And i ended ya rapverse career before it even started
Nice Closer Punch Hit Hard. 7.5/10

Cal, Ya Structure Was Betta, Flow Was Better, Punches Were Better.
BK Fix Ya Structure And Be More Creative Wit Ya Punches.
Overall Cal Took This Wit a Better Verse.