Aint gonna hate on the biting, cos I been accused for using 2 words from a Wu Tang joint... I liked this a lot, the style was a lot more understandable N-Demik, you pushed your imagery through, both verses combined well and were both on concept, the concept was well thought of, nice ideas... The rhythm was sturdy, multies and internal rhymes all the way through, a good rhyme scheme... Good used of vocab, it was sharp and balanced, understandable and was equipped with good amounts of wordplay... Feeling this, it was a good story line verse, keep dropping the gems...

Peez...