Yeh this was looking good in the first coupla bars, deep lines and good use of vocab and then it kinda fell off towards the end... It was quite simplistic, had its moments and lines, some places you were coming deep and understanding... The rhyme scheme was aight, more internal rhymes and some sharper multies, flow didnt seem choppy though, vocab fell off towards the end, had some elements of similes... It was a decent drop, a good piece to elevate through, keep spitting...

Peez...