This is nice man, wordplay infactuated with a strong flow... The concept was nice, been seen it done a coupla times now, but you still produced well... The flow was tidy, a sturdy rhyme scheme with good multies and some inernal rhymes to give it some strength... Vocab was used but balanced, good knowledge words used with the wordplay, and the similes were easily your strongest point... You mos likely to be a battle cat, keep spitting and elevating, look forward to seeing more of your work...

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