View Single Post
Old 10-06-04, 03:55 PM   #35
G Deuce
Artist, that simple
 
G Deuce's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,545
From: The Underworld
IP:

Voted For: mic-wrecker

This battle was sorry to say, Hands down.
Creativity - 3rd Shift
Punchlines - 3rd Shift
Structure - Tied
Word Play - 3rd Shift
Sentence flow - 3rd Shift
Complexity - 3rd Shift

Conclusion:
Ruff Ridah, just keep on battling more, and you will elevate. It showed in this battle your status in the "battling arena". You simply need to elevate more, and that will come wit practice. 3rd Shift, not your best, but it was enough. You were tight at the beginning, but it seemed that you was searching for punchlines at certain spots. But it was enough.

Vote - 3rd Shift
Good battle Overall
__________________
Grim
Send a message via AIM to G Deuce