A good all round knowledge shown with the strong vocab, but this had no substance didnt seem it was going anywhere... The flow was sturdy, good use of multies, lacced some internal rhymes, but it was working... Vocab was obviously your strongest point, I think ya need to tone it down slightly... Wordplay was laccing aswell would like to see more metas and similes, its a solid piece though, keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...