this was alrite man, but you still need to elevate quite alot but that will come wiv time n frequently droppin verses....ya flow was o.k n ya structure was gud to me but ya need to up ya vocab n try to bring abit more wordplay into ya verses, emotion was gud but cud still be upped....o.k im giv this..

6.5/10

keep elevatin n droppin...props

hit this up
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153781

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