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Old 10-06-04, 08:25 PM   #15
BkBrawla
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Voted For: Logikal"Lyrickz

ok logical"lyrics its best you stay new to rv
cos i rape bitches like you who think they can test me
ill put a gun to your balls ill watch you whimper and cry
wishing for me not to pull this trigga lose your balls and die
im lyrically untouchable what makes you think you can beat me
when imma beat you to a pulp, and smashing your head on my knee
you got me pissed off so imma cut you up piece by piece,
people find a dismembered body so the phone the police,
"oh it's only logical"lyrickz he probaby fucked with the wrong men"
he probably forgot if you fuck with me you wont be speacking again.

^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U HAD SOME "OK" PUNCHES ELEVATE ON DAT DOUGH~! U HAD GOOD FLOW MUCH RESPECT ON DAT ONE~! AND GOOD STRUTURE

BUT ELEVATE ON DEM PUNCHES WASNT REALLY HITTIN IT BUT OTHERWISE DIS AN GOOD VERSE


Yo i aint gonna waste my clips on dis bitch/
Ill merk him,his family and dump em' in a ditch/
Ill cut in to ya vein,an' injekt my lyrical pain,burn ya like acid rain,Im off tha hook an' off the chain,
Plustwo cant rap fo' shit,The only time he is ILL is when he suckin on DICK,
See here i go ravagin' ya rhymes wid my lyrical onslaught,
Damage ya ligaments and ya fucked up train of thought,
Ive injected u wid my lyrical virus thats wot uve caught,
Next ull be shakin on tha floor wid a seizure face covered in contort..


^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U HAD GOOD VERSE HERE. PUNCHES WERE GOOD FLOW WAS GOOD AND DA STRUTURE WAS GOOD I GIVE DIS TO U CAUSE U HAD BETTA PUNCHES DAN PLUS2

ELEVATE THOUGH "OK" ON PUNCHES BOTH OF YALL

BUT GOOD BATTLE
GOOD VERSE
CLOSE BATTLE

RETURN AN FAV (HONEST VOTE)
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