hullabaloser
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Voted For: JPoll
Honestly JPoll took this one, he used good wordplay and had some nice punches.
King Keno, your structure wasnt really all there and the punches weren't that great, my advice, lose the ~ and work on your structure, that will help you to elevate.
JPoll
You had some good punches there, nice wordplay and good personals aswell, the only part of your verse I didnt think was so hot was the closer, but that was still a pretty good punch, just maybe coulda been worder different.
Overall was ok battle, Keno needs to come stronger next time, JPoll dont really need no advice from me.
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