Voted For: distilled

incept- man that was not enjoyable. bring down ya font size, make punches wittier and harder and try harder in general cuz that was whack. only close to good line was the closer and it was only like 5/10..........4/10

distilled- i liked yours better much better structure and i chuckled at one of the punches so you basically get the win. last line was self glorification so try not to do that anymore, other than that try to get more complex and witty and u got battles on lock......7/10

V/distilled
RTF...pz.

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