Tru-$hocka-
You attempted some punchlines but I really didnt feel many of them. You also had some wordplay...You second was the nicest of your verse. Flowde better than your opponent. No multis or inners really...And you only wrote about half of what he did...You rverse had a lot of filler and punches that could have ben reworded...Nothing braggable..
Overall:3.0/10

Mc4Eyez:
Better verse in all categories exceot for flow. Punches were more direct and hit harder...You had better wordplay although it was stretched or played...You put more material down and thats basically what it came down to...
I've seen more interesting verses than yours written with just the space bar
/\ hah...prettynice punchline..

That and sex are the only times this kid could finish first
/\ another good punch...

You had some multis...overall better verse..work on your ocmplexity and flow...
Overall:5.5/10