Voted For: Efusive

Aiiight.... VA Ya Verse Was Nice...The Structure Was Good... Nice Wordplay And Multies...Punches Could Have Been Better, The Whole Highliting His Name And Making It Stand Out Is Played Out And Doesnt Help Your Verse In My OPinion As Does Your Last Bar Where You End Up Non Rhyming Like You Was So Sure Of Yourself That You Would Fuck Around But You Underestimated Your Opponent And Your Closer Is The Finishing Touch And You Messed It Up With That Played Out Non Rhyming Bar...

Efusive..Ya Opener Was Straight You Should Bring More Fire To An Opener Though To Get The Reader Intrigued... Now The 2nd Bar Was Straight Fire And Flowed Perfectly Good W/P, 3rd Bar Was Some Funny Shit Good Metaphor About The Chest Was Feelin It... After That Point Your Verse Was Mediocre And You Could Have Put More Effort Into It...Overall I Think You Edged This One Out But Work On Your Structure And Consistency

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