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Old 10-07-04, 04:30 AM   #10
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Voted For: Efusive

lmao
funny battle

VA
u had a dope vocab and all but ur punches just were not hittin...ur structure was nice as well was your flow,you also had a couple good punches in there...and u had an okay opener and closer

EFUSIVE
your verse had humor,i laughed throughout the whole thing rofl,dope and funny punches,and a good structure with excellent flow held your verse perty solid..although it looked like u feel off toward the end....u also had a couple of hidden personals in that verse..solid opener and a decent closer

overall ima say efusive got this with an all around better verse in every category....VA ur verse was good to but ur punches didnt hit as hard as efusives did

v/efusive
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