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Old 10-07-04, 07:21 AM   #2
Ysdat
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this is good. You had a few light multi's in it. Your flow is mixed in place's.Plus your spelling is fukt(you must of typed this quick).But seen as it is a text peice you should try spell shit properly.because I was tryna spit this and when a word wasnt spelled correct it sorta fucked thing it up. Also you leave word's out. for instance......cuz i love fuckin scrap...... should there be a to between love and fucking. This sorta fucked me up when I was spitting it..............

but this is a good drop. I just felt like pointing out the thing's I could see wrong with it...........
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