wow, i really enjoyed reading this,i dont think i've had the chance to read any of your stuff, but i'm glad i got to read this...you had great vocabulary and the ability to keep the rhymes flowing the whole way thru, nice imagery in your words as well, touching content too, this has a good point to it, and this poem shows your strong style, i liked that you kept the title in this piece throughout it, there is truth to this poem and a great message, keep em coming....1

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