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like the imagery and wordplay, good emotion also. stylistically some of the lines need playing with, like the flow and rhyme aint always what they could be. all the same, i was definitely feeling it. i'd say... 7/10.
return the favour and check out my "fulcrum shift" piece if you get the chance. peace!
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