this piece was good.. ..sounds like its more of a spoken-word poem but tha emotion was felt one tha less.. ..

"It figured why I dissolved my knees and emotion showed,
Released the swept tear that speared through my soul,
Nav, I never felt such a fear of losing you the most,
I pushed you away, prayed it a hoax measure to motion,
Shamed the woes, left me in effort, breathless and broken,
Couldnt feel a human sigh to a word that was spoken,"

my favorite lines, i was feelin tha hook too.. ..good shit, keep ya head up


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