Voted For: BkBrawla

caliph...



IP:

This rookie wanna push me damn he suicidal as fuck
Its over like 4 leaf clovers he survive me its luck
played.

One zero on both sides its hopeless for you to keep it the same
If you threw up gasline on a bonfire you still couldnt spit flames
old and played as well.

Ya elevations placement underground like dearly departed
And i ended ya rapverse career before it even started
ok.


BkBrawla...

...Spittin out raps soundin like malarky, invisible... gettin stop by my rap dimocracy, hipocracy alls ya spit, when my flows put ya out miraculosly/
no..dont like it
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...Ya gettin rejected like kids to small for rides, commin up short at designated times, ya raps be like dirty pipes, how ya spittin resinated ryhmes/
ehh could of been better.
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...Poppin this newbs top like a shampagne cork, bendin and twistin An's more then bikes on torque, / ya never gone all the way, only cummin to a fork/
dont like it muc.
To the end of the week I live by the beat like you live check to check, and if you no move yo feet then I dont eat so we like neck to neck. (OutKast)..................
nah..

i see BkBrawla taking this battle with a more solid verse,
his concepts were better and as well as the setups which
made his punches land harder...both came played and new
to work on wording better and brawla get rid of the "......"
"//" ----" those make your verse less interesting to read.

V/ BkBrawla.