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Old 07-17-02, 05:26 PM   #12
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OFF~CeNTeR

- Madd Professor, Unique? I cant tell who's the real Stan,
- Smack this clown so hard his name flips...DDAM! DDAM!//

First line was alright, but the second line was pure filler.

- Even my tongues murderous...Im 'armed to the teeth'//

Ill line. A bit played, but still ill.

•madd•Professor•

- yo center, what was with the "DAMN! DAMN!"?/
- 1-800-CHARTER called, fingering yourself while typing is "BAD! BAD!"/

This was a decent try. But it didn't really work.

- nor could he be more behind hiphop if he rhymed backwards/

Nice wordplay.

This battle goes to Off Center for a more complete verse. He took this kinda easy. Good luck to both MCs in the later rounds.