omg gege this is amazing this reminds me of my sick n demnited ish........wow this was sad too gurl had alot of vivid an dexplicit real life scenarios all over in it...amazing peaice gurl im feelin al lof it damn im just in awe hol on ima quote some ish

No rubber will please us, that was the thesis, that left one woman wondering where her bleed-was..//

^ set t hewhole story line right there in those few word syou knew what hte story was gonna be about
......damn thats talent hol on i got some more to say

Moans from a man she drowned out, she only thought of loans for a plan..//
bones for a hand, of crisp 20's..was the transaction that owned once began..//
A shameful living, that stripped her of her honor as much as it did her clothes..//


^ shows what shes felein and all females can relate to tha tin some way after your first time you feel dirty you cant lie about that.........shit MY JAW IS IN AWE.........i only come to this site to keep in touch wit you n keezy and darneck and im impressed every single time hol on got more to say

but amidst the weeds she found a rose, a man who cared, or so he shows..//
^ that should happen to more of us.........THIS PEICE IS ABSOLUTLEY FUKKIN ILL

she's sorry he hit her all night, face so covered in tears they barried it..//
but most of all shes sorry for her baby..........she miscarried it..//
^ that right there is somethin id write for sure........you n me would make an il lcollab gurl fo real but that right htere is WHAT THIS PEICE represents to me........the finality the drama is right there man im amazed damn amazed this is by far my fave peice from you.............you have tru talent and tru skill and the fact is i envy you cuz you got this essence that surrounds you........your work shows it.........your name shows it........your overall APPEAL shows it............im amazed ima print this out and save it........absolutly amazin please gurl since i cant ever catch you online email me hazyluk@hotmail.com..........an dlet me kno how i can collab wit you

HAZY BABY