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Old 10-07-04, 09:39 PM   #20
BkBrawla
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue

Ill beat this cat into solatary inslavement//
Karate his ass and put his face in the pavement//

I'll choke you, cut your oesophegus and mess up your blodd patern//
Shove a candle up you ass and light you up like a jak-o-lantern//

Right, its time to diploy my arsenal, against my oppsotion//
This cats dumb found, and lies more than a politician//

You seldom see people, whos name sounds like a disease//
Im planning a lyrical offencive, that will beat you with ease//

Hes taking anitbiotics, to cure his sore ass, YOU FOOL//
The real cure would be to turn hetorasexual//

Im challenging more people, to make my self brainier//
While your loosing energy, like a blood donator//

My raps flow like a river, whiles yours flow like a glacier//
Hurry up man, im getting impatient here!!//

Im barracading my defecnces, to keep away your kind//
And im importing ray guns, that will leave yu dickless and paralized//

Can you understand my raps?, can you work them out as an individual?//
Or do i need to stoop to your level and be more pictorial//

<(X.X)> - this is you once
- i have finished
with you!!

Your name sounds like one of the many diseases you posses//
Although my verse finishes after 20 lines, the torture is still endless//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ TIGHT~! GOOD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW GOOD STRUTURE AND WORDPLAYS KEEP DOIN YO THANG


nope i aint gonna choke ill spit a verse longa then ROPE//and wit that peice ill snap ur THROAT//nuttin u can do bar HOPE//ill miss the time and u'll win this NOPE it aint gonna happin im gonna b battlin til the day i die then aint no lie and if i miss this ill just slide on2 the next 1 just 4 fun ill kick u in the bum hold on hun dont worry bout ,y gun cause c that hole in the wall theres a 12 gage shootty pointing at yall cock it back "now who wants a crack" this bitch is a noob yo stop bein so rood and dissin ur self u aint welfy and not goona b u wanna b try hard gansta maybe thats y ur mumma spanked ya but yea give us some respect and ill make a note to put u in the next tourment cause im 2 high 4 u theres plent-y of battlers out there y u have to pic mey yo im gonna take this eazy hopen that u feel me and respect the australian rappers in this league so feel free to do wat u wanna cause i aint gonna stop ya and this unlimeted shit aint nuttin man u cant deal wit it i can keep going but ill stop real quik ppl this fella needs 2 raise the stakes im dealing wit amenturs that im eating like a peice of cake so raise the stakes and come bac wit somtin that ill love to hate call me insane but ur pic is on my wall wit a knife through ur brain im playin my game and chasing the fame
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DAT WAS NOT AN GOOD VERSE
BECUZ DA STRUTURE WAS MESSED UP,,,,,,,,,DA FLOW IS MESSSED UP I COULDNT READ IT AITZ ELEVATE ON DA STRUTURE 'OK"

V-MISTIC CAUSE ALL AROUND BETTA VERSE
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