Voted For: optimized

not even close to me....Op you had better structure and it flowed better and it had good bar length...Chi i thought you had it in the first lines but then i think you lost it a bit towards the middle and the end...Chi did the murkin in the first couple lines and Op did it in the rest of the way....oh yeah and Chi....there was an almost identical line in anothers post about de"feet"....i dont know if you saw it or what but i hope it wasnt a direct bite....no hatin just honest fb....1