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Old 10-08-04, 02:33 AM   #5
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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this song was fuckin whack...gay ass shit..I should Smoke you Jokas jus for putting out this crap...bwaahahaha love you guys


Dank - Verse 1 I like the verse...the low sound makes it sound like your mumbling, but its jus the volume which will be fixed once you master the track....good verse..story is good..lyrics are a bit simplistic
Dank - Pre-Chorus I'm feelin it...adds to the darkness of this track
SmokaJoka - Hook Good job...flows with the track well
Rapidfire - Verse 2 decent verse...thought some of your lyrics could have been chosen better...flow is off sometimes..maybe thats jus me...lyrics are kinda simple

Overall i liked this track...it was deep..and had an eery feeling to it..

8/10
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