yeah dawg u kept it madd real if you would have made it longer it would have been even better. Son when you try to write deep intelligent rhymes dawg do it high kid, trust me this always works B- and listin to gangsta life shyt like Styles P or one o them mufukas. It like, gives you madd ideas and manuvers for putting the right words in at the right time. nah mean, tha shit works fa real. u'll spit like a tru gangsta.


now that i peeped and replied to yo shyt peep and reply to mine kid. good lookin dawg. i call it slum flow. it's kinda like yours but longer. i used my method on it too ^^^ writin high method

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=17122

good lookin fam
1ne