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Old 10-08-04, 10:57 AM   #40
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Voted For: Quick Witted

Imma Give This To Scenario.......

Upfront: You Had Some Pretty Decent Punches. Im Afraid Ya Structure Messed Every Thing Up For Ya. I Couldn't Really Tell Where Ya Lines Started Or Finished. Really Hard To Read.
Which Meant Ya Flow Was Off Too. Decent Enough Punches But Hard To Read.

Scenario: Decent Structure.Real Nice Flow. Ya Had Some Pretty Nice Punches Here. I Can tell This Was One Of Ya Early Battles Coz Ya Improved Ya Wordplay And Structure Alot. Overall A Pretty Decent Verse Though.

Imma Have To Give It To Scenario Coz He Had Betta Flow And Structure.

Vote: Scenario