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Old 10-08-04, 11:25 AM   #41
Terumoto
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Voted For: Quick Witted

upfront: shit was wack... no structure n' way stretched.. flow off cos of ya limited vocab.. weak punches... no offense, just my opinion.

Scenario: A lot worse than ya later stuff... but why is obvious if you look at the date of this battle.. your punches were on and off, but most hit.. nothing to go "ooo" at but they were decent.. flow was a little basic, but fine... wordplay was a little simple.. a decent verse for this level though..

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