Voted For: CarsonJetX2
carson: ur text got better -_-... was kinda nice.. short lines to the point.. nice vocab.. nice flow.. pretty decent verse.. 7/10
effe ct: i hate stretched verses.. ur lines were kinda streched.. some played lines.. u used one word wrong and it wasent needed.. average verse.. not bad... 6/10
id say carson edged em out with less stretched lines and better flow..
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