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Old 10-08-04, 02:20 PM   #15
Parallel
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Voted For: Golden shellz

golden shellz:
that was weak man but you came ahrder weak battle alright verse flow not bad...stucture coulda ben better try and add soem witty metas and punches in there tho...then your verse would be dope try add some complexity by ading vocabulary to but you won you had some tight attepts to punches but at least your stucture was better then your oppenents...

dmizzle:
that was hella weak stucture hella off flow hella off.. vocabulary hella weak as fuck!cant say anything to brring your convidence up cuz that was pure weak..
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