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Old 10-08-04, 02:26 PM   #21
Parallel
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this was a weak battle for vets.. weak on vocab coula benn better:

Phantom:
k that was ight but you merked this guy or gurl.. name fucked cofused..but anyway you had some tight punches hilarious on dissing the name to... liked that it was more of a funny verse punches were way tight then anxiety's well that i noticed trey and work on vocabulary tho.. add more wity punchs in there to i seen a little but not enough.. for vets..

Anxiety:
that was weak for a vet maybe not even a vet now vocab was igth not the best but some just not good enoguh punches you kinda forced yer rhymes a lil to...ight verse tho it was a avarage verse five ten prob not tight at all weak..

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