Hazyyy!
Gyrl, I cant even tell you how much talent I've seen in you cuz i would sound like i was just blabbin out the mouth to hear myself talk..Your pieces all just have somethin the others dont..always goin deep, with mixtures of hard experiences and true innocense all in one flow..

>That all those bits of metal, had hardened into steel.
That it covered up my heart and made me unable to feel.

That line just explained everything you were gettin at in the beginning of the verse..

>I'm locked outside the metal ball,
I don't think I'll ever get inside
But then again, with my horrible memories,
It's no wonder I never tried.

That was the perfect way to end it..jus perfect..
Really really nice piece here, Hazy baby..
Youre ALWAYS a good read n i got nothin but luv n props for ya ma..
stay up n keep blessin us.
peace.