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Voted For: disciple05
vote to disciple05, i liked your verse kid, not bad, just one tip, get rid of the "" * and the spaces between your lines, we dont need help finding where your punches are ok so DONT use them!
punches go to disciple05
you had nice punches which were thoguth up well, good word play and metas, g speedm your punches werent bad but a bit basic, make them more coplex and use more exstensive wordplay
flow goes to disciple05
you had good flow, it was consistant and your verse was structured well, good battle
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