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Old 10-09-04, 02:04 AM   #20
Terumoto
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Voted For: e-dubz

Your used to having cats carry you, like trash in a bag,
blades 2 ur face, so u'll have more 'red stripes' than our flag
^that was nice.
Stays behind my bars, like he in the pen, thinkin "whats so bad that i did?"
Promotion? Hell, I dont need it, cuz even your reppin' me in ya sig
not that great
You'll remember my rhymes forever, cuz they stay glued to your heart
This 'whack virus' made his old 'clas so sic' that they fell apart
good personal
Spit in 5 mins while u study my style like football tapes & keep rewinding
Your punches are like clocks set wrong, they always have bad timing
a little played
u can't touch my style, so to you, I'm outta reach like a tall bball rim
u claim that ur "tight" but u've been 'fucked', & bout to be fucked again
pretty good
I 'flow' outta nowhere on emcees, like 'unexpected raindrops'
He couldn't 'rap around me' and make me 'trip' if he was 'baggy socks'
not feelin this closer

overall - a pretty good verse... opener was good.. flow was fine.. wordplay could have been a little more complex..



never step to me... quotes in my sig u kno i spit hot sounds*
my AK like european gamblers.... they have u losin pounds
nice meta
dont got a chance like fat women in bikinis... bring the noise
so like nelly.... he's only lunatic when he's around his boys
haha
im bout to rip you a new pussy right in the middle of ya face
where ya mouth used to be so you can develop some taste
hmmm.. not that great
flowz your just a ‘waste of time’.... u droppin ‘expired shit’
sit and bitch as i rip the ‘threads’ out of yo ‘fabricated’ spit
a little simple
with my hot flow heads get hit son and then bruised in trauma
now you ‘got no-body’...... like president Nixon in ‘Futurama’**
this one was nice
everything you spit is fucked, like you got a dick in your neck
plus you cant touch me..... like Mc Donalds Chicken Selects
good closer

overall: I was feelin ya wordplay more... some lines were eh.. but other were ill.. more creative than flowz.. nuthin wrong with ya flow.. punches his harder... but no personals??

v/ dubz
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