Voted For: RED BEAM

BEAM

structure is alright.. flow fell off a little bit.. no multis.. u attempted wordplay, but that didnt come out so great.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Lyrical Disciple

structure is good.. flow falls off a little.. no multis.. puting "" around ur words doesnt make wordplay.. u attempted it, but most of it came out wack.. not very many of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall

both had a pretty good structure.. both flows fell off a little.. both attempted wordplay, but neither of them came out to good.. neither had multis.. neither had good personals.. what it comes down to is that BEAM had more creative punches.. Disciple tried, but putting a red beam on his chest WASNT creative.. so basing off of that.. BEAM gets my vote..

VOTE - BEAM

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