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Old 10-09-04, 05:37 AM   #8
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Voted For: disciple05

G Speed: this was bad, u had a few goodlines and that's it, u cussed to much in there, i'm not a christian or anything but ur verse was filled with like a cuss word right after one which made parts of ya verse seem like fillers, punches just weren't hitting, structure was ok, flow was kinda off, a few multi's, ur opener was weak and ur closer was also weak, the opener was worse though, ok personal, elevate kid. overall 4/10


Lyrical Disciple: much better verse, punches were hitting, good play off his name, some good meta's, flow could have been better along with the structure, good personals, not really any multi's, some ok wordplay, all ur punches seem to hit hard, could be better but good job. overall 7/10



vote: Lyrical Disciple


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