Voted For: Plutonium

Plutonium Gots This.....

Mistic: Structure Was Kind Stretched. Flow Was Ummmm, Ok. Ya punches were Kinda Weak. You Set Them All Up Nicley and I Was Waiting For The Finish But Basically No End Product. Here's An Example:

You call yourself Plutonium, yet you lack explosive power//
^Brilliant Opener^
You should call youself petrol, or maybe gun powder//
Where Was The Punch?? It Was Just Aa Statment.

Plutonium: Aight Real Nice Structure. You Kept It Near Perfect For A Full 30 Lines. Nice Job. Flow was On Point. You Had Some Brilliant Wordplay And Metas. Example:
he punches with "megabyte" cause his punches are "Microsoft"//
There Were Many others But That One Stuck Out The Most.

Overall: Mitic Ya Need To Work On Ya Structure and Maybe Come Harder Wit Ya Punches. Plutonium Ya Just Had Better Structure, Punches, couple of personals, Metas, Wordplay. im Not Sure Ya Had Any Multies Here. But Still A Nice Verse.

Vote: Plutonium

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