Get Cooked Hoe
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Voted For: BlanKo
Battlin a rookie ima ko this this dude one punchline will make u lose this bout
BLANKO get hit so hard peeps gonna think a UT is missin from his name when i make him BLANKOUT
So think straight before the gage leave u wired like jail fences
i slap bitches and leave red dots on his face like the kid from dennis the mennis(freckles)
if u really want me i'll come meet up wit u in SIN CITY and start gunnin
but i bet the only SIN in the CITY is when u show yo face in PUBLIC
Its not even WORTH IT battlin this dude makes me look PERFECT
I know why now u say u CAN'T BE BEAT cause u just lost ur viginity and stop JERKIN
i play around wit u like a circus cause for certain im only doin it on purpose youre probably a lier
yeah u might be a UNDERGROUND ARTIST cause u PAINT with GOLD MINERS
cause i know yo punches goin to HIT LOW to the flo
the only reason is because this gay guy spends his life givin LOW BLOWS
i didn't even try to make this battle on really intense why do i even botha
get hit in yo adumblaomlagota(head) and leave a HUMP on yo BACK with the muthafuckin llama
my flo's are like cigers the fire leads to SMOKE and its is bad for yo health
U couldnt BLOW UP QUICK the the top if u strapped 30 second timed BOMB to yo SELF
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT AIGHT U NEED TO WORK ON STRUTURE CAUSE THERE AINT NO FLOW~! NOT REALLY GOOD CREATIVE PUNCHES KINDA ALL PLAYED
FIX THE STRUTURE AND USE HARDER PUNCHES BE CREATIVE "OK"
Spitz Ill/ He Gets Killed/ So He's Duckin Me Quick
It's Sick/This Lil Prick Bitch /Only Got "Skillz" When He "Suckin A Dick" 2
Thats Why I Don't Front In Raps/ Put The Pump To Backs
His Lungs Collapsed/ Got His 'Arms Up In The Air' Like "Jumpin Jacks" 4
This Kid Dumb So He "Dwellin In Shame"/ Got Em Yellin In Pain
Battlin Me You Must Got No Fuckin "Cells In Ya Brain" 6
This Lil Bitch Skillz Will Get Smacked Wit Tha Steel
Tryin To Rap Like You Ill / Thats How You Get Slapped In Ya Grill!!! 8
This Whack /Cat /Lacks/ Facts/ In His Raps/
He'll Get Attacked/ Wit A Gat / Or At Least Cracked In The Sack Wit A Bat !!!! 10
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U HAD AN GOOD VERSE HERE CAUE U HAD AN GOOD STRUTURE=GOOD FLOW,,,,,,NICE PUNCHES AND MULTI'Z ELEVATE MORE USIN HARDER PUNCHES
V-SKILLZ CAUSE HE HAD BETTER STRUTURE AND BETTA FLOW PLUZ SOME GOOD MULTI'Z
BLANKO-WORK ON SOME STRUTURE AND SOME CREATIVE PUNCHES,,,,,,,,CAUSE YO VERSE WAS PLAYED~~!
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