Voted For: Lyrical Disciple

he wants us to compare him to washers, he says he's all around the whirl
Whenever beef crosses your path, you find a corner and curl
You prolly think like a diplomat, you love rockin pink
I guess i'll take out this old garbage, cause i learned you stink
Lyrical Disciple, thats funny, i'll never run to you for advice
Im the type to strike up fire, i'll get in yo head like lice
he only wanna battle me, cause i votes against his weak rhymes
Dawg, your facing one of the best, take this here as a sign
when i beat you 5-0...i know you'll be loosin it
but this nigga so used to failin, i think he's abusin it
Red BEAM on ya dome, this niggas rhymes is real simple
you got no potential to go against me, get popped like pimples
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE,,,,,PUNCHES WERE "OK" AND THE FLOW WAS GOOD~! USIN AN PERSONAL AND PUNCHES THATS AN PLUS~! OVERALL GOOD VERSE KEEP DOING IT USE HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS



exactly nigga ill put a "RED BEAM" on ya chest
have you gaspin for ya breath
you aint tha King from Sac you mean tha Queen
only time you royal is in ya dreams
thinkin you "got connects on RV"
sorry cuzz i think you mean "burgers at arbys"
ill serve you like employes servin coffe
get to cocky
and ill throw "punches" that will knock you out like "rocky"
ill "heat" you up like a "Red Beam" and "burn" yo ass like "usher"(usha)
get to close and tha Lyrics will crush ya
ill have ya so called "connects" turn they back and rush ya
cuzzo from Sac(sack)that why he be ridin dicks
he like a lil boy make beef and call it quits
ill play some"Basketball"with ya head
reshape it and play "Football" SOME BODY CALL THA MED!!!
ya choose "Red" you always end up bleedin
chrome on tha dash will leave yo ass freezin
like an ice cicyle
cant you see you fuckin with tha Lyrical Disciple
ya rhymes is played out you goin "around" in a "circle"
im "flooding" tha "flow" but im not steeve earkle
i hope this is Perspiuous cuzz i dont wanna have this conversation again
Gelatnous nigga for votes he go and try to make Friends

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE VERSE HERE GOOD ISH,,,,,,,HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW


V-LYRICAL DISCIPLE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCES AND FLOW

YO REDBEAM I C U TRYIN TO USE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT HITTIN HARDER ELEVATE OK U'LL GET BETTA

~PEACE~

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